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Monday, May 16, 2011

Swimming with Sharks!

I had the pleasure of reading through (yes, from start to finish) a great source of inspiration called Query Shark.    To say I had fun would be an understatement!  While the blog does contain some language that could be offensive, the agent that moderates it just made me belly-laugh!  My kids thought I was playing around when I was supposed to be working!

Anyway, Query Shark invites authors to send their query letters (for fiction only) - that's the initial introduction that authors will use to promote their stories to agents or publishers (See, I'm learning!!!) - and discusses in detail everything that's wrong with them, until they have a letter that is ready to send.  (Or until their letter proves beyond a shadow - which sometimes doesn't take very long - that their writing ability just isn't ready to share with the outside world.)

I am so profoundly grateful to all of those aspiring authors who were brave enough to offer their queries.  I learned so much reading through all of their mistakes and hope I don't make any of my own.  (Yeah, right!)

In the end, I took the plunge and after pouring over my letter 7 times to make sure I had caught every single typo and awkward sentence, I sent mine in for perusal.  Doubtless my own will have plenty wrong with it; I just hope she uses it so I can see what I still need to do! 

This is what I've learned from my investigations into the world of query:
  • ***Do the research to learn which agents might be interested in my story.
  • ***Use the agent's submission requirements - every agent has their own personal style.
  • Keep the query to 250 or less
  • Start with a "hook," a one- or two-sentence nutshell statement about the book to excite the agent to read on.
  • Use the main character's first name in the hook - most of the time, start with that name.
  • Write a one- to two-paragraph teaser about the story, like the ones on the back of paperbacks.
  • Don't tell the ending.
  • Do include the word count, genre, title
  • Describe writing experience (which means actual published work - not self-published.)  It was never actually stated, but I'm guessing since the only thing I've published so far is a poem, I should leave that section out.
  • Complete the query with contact information.
Omygosh!  I just realized I didn't put my physical address in the contact information of my query!  What a ditz!  I deserve the shark-bite for that one!

Okay, look over the bullets.  What did I miss for a query letter for a novel?

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